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april fifth draft

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i thought it would be interesting if i posted a part of the writing process i go through, since i happened to do it on paper today. basically i just scrawl fragments and stick em together into a final draft, sometimes tweak words here and there. i didnt like the sound of "brown sugar beaches" so i left that one out 
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1947x2881px 700.29 KB
Make
Apple
Model
iPhone 6
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/2.2
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
Apr 6, 2017, 11:41:56 PM
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pansydiv's avatar
karen. how dare you upload something so incredible and brilliant and priceless and raw this is so beautiful it makes me want to cry!!!! 
"brown sugar tastes like pretty boys" is such a lovely line, your handwriting is really wonderful & authentic and idk i'm using the wrong words but basically your handwriting is soft in the same way your poems are which makes sense to me!!!! 
basically i feel like someone pulled my heart out with tweezers but in the best possible way, can i print this?

let's just pretend this comment makes sense